dleaf60's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Green riding hood]

awesome!

body language worked very well

gusana responds:

Thanks!

[OCT3 - Something's Amiss]

not bad

this probably looked a lot better in your head
keep working at it! the fight scene lacked a bit of drama, but not many flash animators know how to choreograph let alone animate a fight scene anyway

AnDrew19787 responds:

This one was actually pretty close to what I imagined it would be. However, I do try to set high standards for myself so that I can improve.

[proper technology use]

"you sick fuck"

i loled at the replay button... other than that, it's pretty mediocre.

the anticlimax needs more buildup, although the transformation was pretty good, the camera angles could have been more diverse to create a greater building up effect.

Horsenwelles responds:

nah, i didn't change what i made last year

[8-Bit Trouble!]

not bad

obviously, your storyboarding could use some more depth
but you're on the way! keep experimenting and submitting to the portal, buddy.

ManspritesIT responds:

Thanks for the review. I will keep that in mind!

[The End of Mecha Sonic]

well established atmosphere

gold sonic makes no ostensible effort to hurl the ball of energy... he pretty much could have done it before all of his friends died, from what I can tell.

there are better sprite animations on NG, but i think this is a promising start. There are things you can improve on, but you did a lot right. Whatever you do, don't give up.

ManspritesIT responds:

I know what you mean.

I didn't want Sonic to reach his super form that easily. The fight had already ended and Mecha Sonic was weakened. Still he had enough power to kill them. Sonic rage gave him the power to easily finish him of.

But anyway, I still thank you for the review though!